There is no denying the fact that purchasing fresh garments is a necessity in the life. This essay will discuss in the present time individuals are looking for fashionable clothes and whether this trend has positive or negative effects. To begin with, there are many reasons for people are prefer buying a fast fashion clothes. Firstly, we can start by saying that is bring more satisfication and confidence for the personality. In other words, most of the people they like to be trendy may cause more satisfied. In addition, before any season the shops start to prepared the color schema and, every one looking for trending in clothes by this store. For example, if the winter season is coming the shopping area offer dark colours such as black, dark red, and navy blue. In terms of reasons
More and more people are buying fashionable clothes these days. Does it have more negative or positive effects? Give reasons for your answers and include examples relevant to your experience.
The essay falls significantly short of the task requirements due to severe grammatical breakdowns, incoherent sentence structures, and an incomplete response that trails off mid...
Prompt
More and more people are buying fashionable clothes these days. Does it have more negative or positive effects? Give reasons for your answers and include examples relevant to your experience.
Essay review
Annotated essay
Error patterns
Band & CEFR
Band 3.5
CEFR A2 · HighAssessment summary
The essay falls significantly short of the task requirements due to severe grammatical breakdowns, incoherent sentence structures, and an incomplete response that trails off mid-sentence. It demonstrates very limited control over simple and complex structures, recurrent lexical repetition, and basic errors throughout.
Scoring criteria
Task Response 4.0
Strengths
- Attempts to address the topic of fashionable clothing and its effects.
Weaknesses
- The response trails off abruptly at the end ('In terms of reasons') and fails to complete the argument or provide a proper conclusion.
- Ideas are underdeveloped and lack clear, logical justification.
- Prompt paraphrasing is awkward and inaccurate.
The response fails to fulfill the basic task requirements because it is incomplete, lacks a conclusion, and contains severely underdeveloped body paragraphs with abrupt ending.
Coherence & Cohesion 3.5
Strengths
- Uses standard introductory markers such as 'To begin with' and 'Firstly'.
Weaknesses
- Paragraph logic breaks down completely, with ungrammatical transitional phrases and non-sequiturs.
- Sentences are frequently disjointed, forcing the reader to guess intended meaning.
- The essay terminates prematurely before any cohesive summary is achieved.
Coherence is heavily disrupted by fragmented sentences, poor logical progression, and an unfinished text.
Lexical Resource 4.0
Strengths
- Some topic-related vocabulary items appear, such as 'fashionable clothes', 'winter season', and 'dark colours'.
Weaknesses
- Extremely limited range of vocabulary with frequent unnatural collocations like 'purchasing fresh garments' and 'fast fashion clothes'.
- Repeated spelling and word formation errors, such as 'satisfication'.
- Over-reliance on basic evaluative phrasing and repetitive structures.
Lexical resource is weak, marked by restricted vocabulary, awkward phrasing, and frequent word formation errors.
Grammar Range & Accuracy 3.0
Strengths
- Occasional simple clauses are recognizable despite errors.
Weaknesses
- Pervasive grammatical errors including severe subject-verb mismatches ('reasons for people are prefer'), tense misuse, and fused fragments.
- Failure to construct accurate complex sentences.
- Widespread misuse of auxiliary verbs and prepositions.
Grammar is heavily flawed throughout, with frequent structural breakdowns, double subjects ('most of the people they like'), and ungrammatical verb forms that impede comprehension.
Writing stats
- Words
- 137
- Paragraphs
- 1
- Grammar issues
- 9
- Lexical suggestions
- 3